Journalism professor Robert Marshall Wells opened class once by writing this on the board:
Fresh Fish Sold Here
He turned to the class. “You run a fish market. You want to get your sign as short as possible. You want to catch the readers’ attention and convey your message. Which words are necessary?”
Well, “here” is not needed. The location of the sign indicates that sales happen in that spot.
Fresh Fish Sold
That “sold” looks kind of silly now, doesn’t it?
Does the fact that the fish are fresh need to be conveyed? Would anyone say otherwise? “Smelly Fish” … “Old, Decaying Fish” ? …Nope.
We are left with:
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